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She is the only one that will go on walks with me. __I__ am the only one that likes to take her on long walks during summer nights. She is one active and crazy __dog__ just like a bunny rabit with very skinny legs and tall just like me. My dog is very lovable and was rescued from __Every Creature Counts__. Our dog loves to run away and my sisters have to go and chase it around the neighborhood. My sisters __Kelsey and Kaylie__ are the only ones that hear my dog howling in the morning and my mom doesn't like it at all.

She is a beautiful dog and a very strong one too. Her howling shows it when she wants attention. Her fiercest quality is __yipping__ when she wants to play or get out of her kennel. She protects us whenever someone is at the front door. My dog barks at the front door and people are afraid to break into my beautiful unique __house,__ pretty just like blooming flowers. It loves, it barks, it's very strong, it protects, and it sleeps.

When I am sad my dog loves to snuggle with me just like a little baby and play ball. She always seems to put a smile on my face. When it does not get to go on walks it makes it very sad. One dog who eats and does not forget to get fed. One whose only reason to live is to play and others want to play.

I made these changes because I wanted my writing to be powerful and make it sound better. I also wanted to use better word choice.

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